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The plot is a bit talky, but hey... that actually fits my goals here. I want to work up to more and more ambitious comics. This chapter does include one big fight scene, which will be a bit scary, but hopefully my skills will be up for it by the time that I get there.
This page honestly was probably a little too ambitious. I squeezed a bit too much art into the page without making it any bigger. I was better at including backgrounds, though... I'm trying to follow the advice that I read (actually here on DeviantArt, IIRC) that to do good backgrounds, you have to learn to love doing backgrounds. I'm... learning to tolerate them right now.
This page honestly was probably a little too ambitious. I squeezed a bit too much art into the page without making it any bigger. I was better at including backgrounds, though... I'm trying to follow the advice that I read (actually here on DeviantArt, IIRC) that to do good backgrounds, you have to learn to love doing backgrounds. I'm... learning to tolerate them right now.
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The story continues to be interesting and makes me look forward to the next 
I think you did okay with the art/size/dialogue ratio... and of course, the backgrounds look good
I think you did okay with the art/size/dialogue ratio... and of course, the backgrounds look good